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The Whetstone Fist - A LitRPG Series: Episode 5

An unexpected explosion sends Waystar academy into chaos. Lock is forced into an complex power struggle between the country's most dangerous men. Lucas continues his hunt for the truth.Really good stuff…★★★★★ “Pros: characters and the relationships between them are great, pace is great, story is great (thanks for not flashing stats every two minutes!)Cons: books are short but published often (so sort of balances out but at these lengths it would be best to publish even faster), some typos… not a problem for me but some people are fanatical about it. I just highlight the errors as I go. I don’t know if authors can see that somehow, so they can go back and make corrections if the want??Overall, it’s a good fun read. I’m looking forward to a lot more of this series. Thanks…” -Mark Twain-Pleasant quick read★★★★ “Engaging main character, enjoyable read. Straightforward story line. Standard litrpg cave system. No significant setback to allow much character growth. A growing friendship, but even less character development for her.” -snarsdale-Engaging Fantasy Story★★★★ “As a fan of fantasy, I have enjoyed the reading this story on the run. Good story. Look for more to come!” -Irene-Good story but…★★★★ “It loses points for grammar mistakes and spelling errors, it's like the author didn't bother to get a good grammar or spell check program when writing this, now the upside, engaging story, litrpg mechanics that dont take up half the book, interesting charactersRead more

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